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"Bitterness"

Bitterness is the color of a soiled towel, left to dry but blown facedown into the dirt.
The color of a soiled towel is the sound of the whispering rushes, foretelling a storm heading in soon.
The sound of the whispering rushes is the smell of blood, tainting the night air, filling it with a damp grudge.
The smell of blood is the taste of grit in the mouth, where the tiniest particle stays.
The taste of grit is the look of a ghoul, making one want to retch in disgust.
The look of a ghoul is the feel of your soul decaying away, until there is nothing kind left.
©2008 ~omgitsamy
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In PACE we're doing the poetry unit and I haven't been posting anything (*cough* Adobe *cough*) so I decided that I'd post the bad poetry that I did for homework today ^^;

This was our "emotional color" poem.
Basically, we filled in these stanza stuff:

"EMOTION is the color of _______
The color of ______ is the sound of ______
The sound of ______ is the smell of ______
The smell of ______ is the taste of ______
The taste of ______ is the look of ______
The look of ______ is the feel of ______"
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~IIIXandaP:iconIIIXandaP: May 15, 2008, 6:27:02 PM
I like it :D

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